这一分数的回答具有以下列出的所有特点:
语言表达:总体上语速适中,语言清晰流畅。存在一些小的失误或发音和语调上的小问题。但是并不影响整体的可理解性。
语言使用:回答显示考生能够有效地运用语法和词汇,回答存在较高程度的自主性并且能够很好地掌握基本和复杂的句式结构。回答允许出现一些明显的小错误,但不会混淆意思。
话题发展:回答一直在持续并且充分满足了题目要求。总体上话题展开比较充分而且具有连贯性。论点之间的关系清楚明了。
我们将以上内容做一总结:
由此可见四分回答也并不是完美无暇的,高分回答也可能会犯一些小错误,只要不影响整体回答的完整性和可理解性即可。下面我们来看一道例题帮助大家更好的理解评分标准。
Some universities require first year students to live in dormitories on campus. Others allow students to live off campus. Which policy do you think is better and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.
Sample 1
I think the better policy is to make student live in the dorm, because the first year student live in the dorm...because I think they can be safer first, because they are from...most are come from other town, so they don’t really know the environment. so...I think it safer. huh...Moreover I think they can make friends in the dorm so they can have good relationship to know on the...on the university’s...is...I mean...they know better the environment. Especially they don’t have cars...
Sample 2
Um... I think it’s better for the first- year students to live on campus rather than off campus. Main reason because they are new to the city and it’s safer for them to live on campus where there’s more security. Because they don’t know much about the city in the first place. Uh... Second of all, it helps them to become more familiar with the surroundings where they have to study. It also helps them to meet new people. Living in the dorm encourages friendships with people who you might not...um...seem very comfortable with first time. And it helps to meet new people, it helps to doing with the seniors if any live in the dorm.
老师给大家两个sample responses,为了方便理解也给出了两个回答的文本,大家理解后可以自己判定一下如果你是rater,你会给这两个答案给多少分?哪一个更符合我们四分的评分标准?
作者简介:
宋佳芮,北美项目新师培训主管,拥有剑桥认证国际英语教学能力证书。SAT数学满分。加拿大布鲁克大学会计专业荣誉学士,曾供职于北美最大的税务公司H&R Block。
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