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4. 范文框架
根据个人对于观点的熟悉程度和本身具有的语料储备,考生可以挑选出合适拓展的观点进行深入撰写。这里, 我们选取前两个原因进行内容编写,大纲如下:
5. 高分范文
Most of us, after completing our education, start our working lives. Our free time, then becomes very important , paragraphs below.
My first point relates to safety. Many people nowadays have sedentary jobs, which involve sitting for long periods in offices. This can prompt people to take up vigorous physical activities in their free time to counterbalance their static working environments. Taking up these physical activities can be dangerous and actually negatively affect their working lives. Aiming to keep fit and healthy can easily backfire and cause unnecessary problems. I remember a particular example of this when my older brother took up kickboxing in his free time. He said he wanted to keep fit because he spent a long time each working day in front of a computer. However, after about a month, he had an accident when he was training. He fell badly and broke his right arm. This led to a lot of time off work with him unable to do his job effectively as his arm and hand were in a plaster cast. It also affected his upcoming promotion, which, due to his accident, was delayed for almost a year. It seems clear that this physical free-time activity was not a good idea for his working life.
An additional point concerns the nature of your work. Some people love what they do, and for this reason, their job does not really feel like work. In this situation, I believe it is fine to continue your interest in and love of your job in your free-time. My neighbor is a landscape gardener and has his own business designing and landscaping people's gardens. He clearly loves his work, and it also keeps him fit and healthy. On the weekend, he often spends most of the day in his own garden with his wife and young daughter. He regularly buys new flowers and bushes to plant, and his family members help him. So, although he is continuing what he does for a living in his spare time, he is also spending valuable time with his family. He seems very happy doing what he does, whether at work or in his free-time.
In brief, I feel there is no need to take up physical activities and hobbies that are different from our jobs. Physical activities can lead to accidents and injuries, which negatively impact our work. Also, if you love your job, there is no reason to do something completely different in your spare time.