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4. 范文框架
根据个人对于观点的熟悉程度和本身具有的语料储备,考生可以挑选出合适拓展的观点进行深入撰写。这里, 我们选取了两个角度的一些原因进行内容编写,大纲如下:
5. 高分范文
The internet and television have brought the outside world into our homes and have given us access to almost unlimited amounts of news and opinions every day. I do not agree with the statement that celebrities' opinions are more important to younger people than they are to the older generation. This view is supported by two key ideas.
The first factor to consider is the amount of free time older people have compared with the young. School and studies tend to dominate younger people's lives, and therefore they have less time to spend online and watching television. In addition, school age children are often not allowed to use electronic devices at their places of study, further restricting their access to famous people's opinions. Older people, on the other hand, have more free time on their hands and few restrictions to being able to watch television or go online. As a result, they could be more easily influenced by the opinions they hear from celebrities. My grandparents are a good example. Since retiring, they both spend a lot of time online and often watch interviews with film stars and singers from their generation. It is clear from listening to both of them that these celebrities' opinions mean a lot to them.
Another relevant point relates to the credibility of celebrities and their opinions to different age groups. For many younger people, celebrity is a fleeting idea and singers and sports people go out of fashion quickly to be replaced by the next big thing. For this reason, these celebrities' ideas and opinions can be replaced just as easily. In this case, it is more the celebrities' actions rather than thei r opinions, which are appealing. Conversely, for older people, celebrities who are of their generation and who have survived the fickle world of fame, are often more appreciated for their longevity. This means their words can carry more weight with their older admirers. I recall a singer in his fifties raising awareness in my country of the need to fight climate change. He did a series of concerts and interviews, and it was the first time that I had seen older people coming to support this cause. This clearly exemplifies my point.
In summary, I disagree with the idea that youth are more influenced by celebrities' opinions than the older generation are. Elderly people nowadays have far more time to spend online and to be exposed to opinions and ideas from celebrities than young people are. Furthermore, older celebrities can have more credibility with the older generation, and therefore their opinions can have more influence on their older fan base.