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4. 范文框架
根据个人对于观点的熟悉程度和本身具有的语料储备，考生可以挑选出合适拓展的观点进行深入撰写。这里，我们取前两个原因进行内容编写，大纲如下：
5. 高分范文
Today's world is quite different from that in the past. As a result, we have seen many changes take place to influence the way families work. I firmly take the stance against the notion that young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives than in the past. I can support this view in two ways.
To begin with, the world is more competitive than in the past, which means parents are often more concerned about their children's future in this environment. In consequence, the parents can be more eager to make decisions for their children in order to maintain a more competitive edge for them. For children in the past, career paths, for example, were often more straightforward and predictable in a less competitive situation. For this reason, it was not so necessary for the parents to take charge. A good example of this change concerns decisions relating to the study. A good friend of mine is a musician and wanted to study music at university. However, his parents stepped in and told him that law would be a better option. They explained that studying music would not offer the stable career prospects that studying law would open up for him. While he did not agree at the time, he realizes that his parents only had his best interests at heart and were better placed to make this important decision.
Another salient point relates to the size of families nowadays. Compared with modern day families with only one or two children, families in the past were usually far bigger. In these larger families of days gone by, each individual would often not have got so much attention from their mother or father and this, in turn, could have fostered more independence in each child. On the other hand, more attention being given to each child these days can lead to an over reliance by the children on their parents. Therefore, parents often make decisions on behalf of their children in these smaller family units. A prime example of this is my neighbor, who is an only child. Her parents make all the important decisions for her, and she seems quite happy with the situation. Her parents have chosen her course of study, as well as her university. She has even consulted them over a relationship she started last year. I believe it would have been unlikely for a young person to have been this reliant on their parents in the past, due to the difference in family size.
In summary, I disagree with the idea that younger people are best suited to making their own decisions than in the past. Parents often intervene in their children's lives in order to help them survive in a more competitive world. As well as that, smaller family sizes can lead to children getting more attention from their parents and thus, can become over-reliant on them.
