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(1) We live in an ever more material world.
我们处在一个极其物质的世界里。
【什么样的物质世界呢?想表达清楚的话,可以指出,在这里我们学会了钱就是王道】 We live in an ever more material world where we are taught to believe that money is king. 我们处在一个极其物质的世界里,在这里我们学会了钱就是王道。
(2) Financial concerns are a part of life.
财务问题确实是生活中的一部分。
【所以就应该让孩子面对金钱奖励的困扰吗?想更好点题的话,可以先认可财务问题确实是生活 中的一部分,再通过转折指出这种问题应该等人们成年后且有赚钱义务时再考虑】
It is true that financial concerns are a part of life, but this should be saved for when people have grown up and they have responsibility for generating money.
财务问题 确实 是生活中的一部分, 但这种问题应该等人们成年后且有赚钱的义务时再考虑 。
(3) I had a friend at junior school.
我高中有个朋友。
【这个朋友与话题有什么关系?想丰富例子细节并点题的话,可以指出他父母会奖励他钱,对他 产生了很不好的影响】
I had a friend at junior school whose parents offered financial rewards to their son and it clearly impacted negatively on him.
我高中有个朋友,他父母就会奖励他钱,这对他产生了很不好的影响。
(4) This may have given him long-term benefits.
这会给他带来长期利益。
【仅仅是带来这些?想表达清楚并对比点题的话,可以指出而不仅仅是一种既丢分又没奖金的失 落感。】
This may have given him more long-term benefits than just a feeling of losing out on a pecuniary reward, as well as a low grade.
这会给他带来更多长期利益而不仅仅是一种既丢分又没奖金的失落感。
(5) Her parents had accepted her academic performances.
她的父母已经接受了她的学习成绩。
【接受了成绩的哪个方面?这与成绩不是唯一衡量标准有什么关系?想表达更清楚的话,可以指 出接受了她的学习成绩并不会很出色,但即便如此也不妨碍他们决心让她学会做一个好人。】
Her parents had accepted her academic performances were not going to be great, but were determined for her to learn to be a good person in spite of this.
她的父母已经接受了她的学习成绩并不会很出色,但即便如此也不妨碍他们决心让她学会做一个好 人。
(6) Moreover, putting too much weight on grades is misguided.
此外,过分重视分数是错误的。
【到底怎么过分重视了?想更具体点的话,可以说过分强调成绩而忽略其它虽不被学校纳入评分 但依旧重要的品质。】
Moreover, this practice is misguided through putting too much weight on grades at the expense of other important personal characteristics that schools do not usually formally mark.
此外,通过过分重视分数而忽略其它虽不被学校纳入评分但依旧重要的品质的这种做法是错误 的。