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托福写作模板:学校如何改善学生宿舍

2020-03-06 17:48

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  新东方网托福频道在此和大家分享最新托福写作模板:学校如何改善学生宿舍,包含题目、范文和词汇积累三部分。请同学们看过题目后先不要着急看范文,先自己思考自己的答案,再看看模板中有哪些值得借鉴和掌握的表达。

  题目

  The university will spend money on the dormitory to improve the life quality of students. Which of the following do you think is the best way?

  1) Providing a room for quiet study

  2) Building an exercise room

  3) Providing entertainment place (watch film)

  范文1:For Choice 2

  If a university wants to improve the quality of life for the students, it should install an exercise room in each dormitory. Exercise balances out a quiet lifestyle based on studying(运动万能句). An exercise room could contain equipment that is impossible to keep in a dorm room, give students as safe place to work out, and provide an opportunity to meet people with the same interests.

  分论点1:运动对学生很重要Exercise is essential for students, but often they neglect working out and focus only on studies. An exercise room in the dormitory would be easily accessible, so would encourage students to take a short break to keep their bodies fit. An exercise room could contain equipment such as weight benches and stationary bicycles(器械名称积累) that are too big to keep in the individual dorm room or too expensive to buy or transport from home. An exercise room, therefore, would be a great investment for the university because it would provide the students with training facilities that they would not otherwise have access to without leaving the campus.

  分论点2:保障学生安全A dormitory exercise room is also a wise idea because students would have a safe place to work out. The university could ensure that the equipment is clean and operating properly. On top of that, students would not have to leave the building to work out. Staying inside benefits the students in two ways. 原因1:避免路途中发生危险First, they do not have to worry about walking alone, possibly late at night when classes are over. That way they do not have to risk trouble with strangers or people following them. 原因2:避免温度变化引起生病Second, they are not exposed to a severe change in temperature. For example, working out in a warm place and stepping outside in the winter, a person can become sick. Such problems are prevented by staying in the same building.

  分论点3:有助于社交Another reason to have an exercise room is to encourage students tointeract with each other(社交万能句). Students may find it fun to exercise together, urging each other on. Students who enjoy exercising can meet each other and become friends. If the students only exercise on their own, they may not realize that someone else has the same interests. Even if they live in the same dorm, they might not have the same classes, and therefore, not have any reason to speak to each other. A common bond of working out together could be formed if the university installed exercise rooms.

  An exercise room allows students to work out on equipment they can’t bring from home in asafe environment with other students who enjoy the same activities. Therefore, adding an exercise room is a great investment for a university.

  balance out

  平衡,抵消

  work out

  锻炼

  on top of that

  除此以外

  to risk trouble with XXX

  冒着与 XXX 产生麻烦的风险

  a severe change in temperature

  天气的剧烈变化

  urge each other on

  相互督促

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