托福写作的评分标准中对语言语法有具体的要求。本文将列举同学们常见语法错误,大家写作中应注意规避。根据以往同学常犯的错误我们将进行分析,下文中的例子均是之前同学们常写出的问题句。此处我们会重点讲解:词性误用,名词,限定词,代词,动词,介词等几个方面。
今天分析的是代词
代词主要是代替名词,故应该与名词在某些性质上保持一致。如单复数形式与名词一致,与指代对象一致,指代对象要清晰等。
例1:
原句:It is plain to say that parents always hope their children to be the most competitive one so that children can gain more opportunities to succeed.
修改:将one改为ones。
原因:ones指代children,应该用复数形式。
例2:
原句:Moreover, the history could be biased and inexact sometimes, so analyzing them would not bring us the right solution.
修改:将them改为it。
原因:history是单数概念。
例3:
原句:People really want to achieve the dreams because dreams are related to your future happiness.
修改:将your改为their。
原因:此处应该指代people,而people是第三人称,your是第二人称。
例4:
原句:He learned a lot of knowledge from the teacher and her scores increased quickly.
修改:将her改为his。
原因:这里描述的是he,是男性。
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(编辑:秦洁)