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新东方托福写作语料库:是否同意竞技体育更多地教给人们生活的经验

2016-04-26 10:38

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作者:薛鹏

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新东方托福写作语料库:是否同意竞技体育更多地教给人们生活的经验

  【观点类】

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing sports will teach people important lessons about their lives. 是否同意竞技体育教给人们生活的经验?(2016年4月23日托福写作题目)

  【相关提问】

  Playing sports teaches more about life. 竞技体育教给人们更多的生活的经验?

  【作家立场】 竞技体育是积累人生经验的重要方式之一,但是,不是唯一的途径。

  【思路拓展】

  ① 生活经验还包括包括家务管理能力、 危机处理能力、自我决策能力、自我保护意识等,这些不是竞技体育传播的。例如,我在美国游学,住在寄宿家庭,就学会如何与周围的人交往和交流,也锻炼了自己的危机处理和自我决策能力、

  ② 竞技体育也是帮助人们积累人生的智慧和经验。具体而言,不懈追求完美,团队精神,合作意识,竞争意识等,这些都是竞技体育可以传递的。

  【谋篇布局】

  首段:背景介绍+争议焦点+作家立场

  二段:第一次支持作家立场

  三段:第二次支持作家立场

  四段:让步原题观点的合理性 + 加以反驳

  尾段:再次亮明观点+(总结理由)

  【范文赏析】

  【首段】背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

  Currently,the awareness of healthier lifestyle enables increasing numbers of people to render more concerns over physical exercises. A great many people are fond of watching various sports competitions or diving into diverse physical activities. However, people have been debating, for many years, whether or not sports events could help people to acquire more knowledge about life. As I see it, sports activities could greatly conduce to enriching one's experience of the world in some aspects, but not in all fields.

  【二段】第一次支持作家立场

  For a start,not all the life experience could be learnt by sports events, the acquisition of life experience still comes from many other channels. One possible way is through traveling. More precisely, one might be seduced into buying some fake or unqualified goods and thus fall into various consumption traps during the process of participating in the tour organized by travel agency. Nevertheless, a fall into the pit, a gain in your wit,one's self-protection could be strengthened after the unpleasant and bitter experience.

  【三段】第二次支持作家立场

  This debate reminds me of my own story. Another crucial ability everyone has to learn is the household management ability. Studying abroad is an effective way for those youngsters to develop and cultivate this competence. In the summer vacation of 2015, I stayed in a homestay family in the America, I had to tackle many arduous tasks by myself such as tidying up the room, doing the washing or cooking for myself. Virtually,this sort of experience greatly chastened my adaptability and viability

  【四段】让步原题观点的合理性

  Sure enough,I have to concede that a sea of life experiences, wisdom and philosophy could be acquired via taking part in sports activities. After all, every sports event has its own charm. Take basketball as an example, every individual ranging from spectator to player could benefit from the sportsmanship they show or appreciate such as the teamwork spirit, cooperation and the tenacious spirit. Also, sports help people foster useful group skills such as coordination and strategies. These skills can help them in their later lives and also in their careers. Eventually, the constant endeavors after each failure in sports competition could inspire people to brave new challenges. What I want to rebut that, however, is that there are still wisdom or lesson could not be obtained by sports events.

  【尾段】再次亮明观点

  In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that although lessons about life could be acquired by sports competition, it is not the sole channel. Traveling or living alone and many other ways still have a key role to play in imparting life lessons.

  【作者简介】

新东方托福写作语料库:是否同意竞技体育更多地教给人们生活的经验

  薛鹏:(新浪微博:雅思小鹏哥),14岁发表作品,20岁出版作品集《选择坚强》 。吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士,前长春新东方功勋教师,长春市作家协会会员,新东方网雅思频道、托福频道专栏作家。2006年获得"外研社/朗文杯"新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军,全国总决赛大学成人组亚军。现独创小鹏哥英语工作室。

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