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新东方托福写作语料库:专业人士是否应该比文体明星更加高薪

2016-02-26 10:07

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作者:薛鹏

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  【社会类】专业人士是否应该比文体明星更加高薪

  Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers make greater contribution. So they should be paid more than those sport and entertainment persons. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人认为专业人士应该比文体明星高薪,是否认同?

  【作家立场】 对比文体明星, 专业人士(医生,教育者,武警等)更有高薪的理由。

  【头脑风暴】一个人的薪水应该和其能力及对于社会做出的贡献成正比,职业背景并非最关键的因素。无论文体明星还是专业人士,都有高薪的理由。然而,贫富差距加大,拜金主义盛行的重要的原因之一就是文体明星的惊人薪水。形成对比是,很多专业人士付出的辛苦更多,做出的社会贡献更大,薪水反而相对较低。因此,专业人士更有高薪的理由。

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  范文赏析

  【首段】首段:背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

  It is not rare to see that some worldly famous entertainers and athletes usually have a sort of comfortable salary compared with other professionals. People have been debating,for many years,whether or not top stars such as movie stars and professional players, should deserve more financial rewards. Personally speaking,they have no reasons to enjoy extremely high income in comparison with other professionals.

  【二段】 让步段:文体明星高薪的理由

  Indeed, I have to concede that those famous entertainers and athletes have some reasons to have handsomely paid jobs. First, their arduous efforts can not only enrich people’s spiritual life but also help people relieve pressure triggered by modern life. Further, striving for stardom requires large amounts of industrious work. Their relatively finite career time may justify their excessive salaries, for high-paying salaries are the rewards of their honest hard work and the security of the rest of life.

  【三段】反驳段:专业人士高薪的理由

  What I want to rebut,however,is that other professionals’ endeavors might outshine super stars’ hard work. For a start, various professional workers make their unique contributions to the society. From our life, it is easy to find numerous examples. Armed Police Soldiers assume the obligation of defending the country, especially when a nation suffers from foreign invasion or natural disaster. A survey conducted by Vista has found that most respondents claimed that policemen or soldiers have sound reasons to get high economic rewards.

  【四段】 反驳段:专业人士高薪的理由

  This debate reminds me my parent, my farther is a teacher, and my mother is a doctor. My father deserves more income because he imparts knowledge and educate people,it is conceivable that efforts coming from educators could foster more talents, who can inject new vitality into the further mightiness of a nation. Likewise, doctors like my mother shoulder the responsibly of healing the wounded and rescuing the dying, therefore, comfortable salary could be considered as a returned favor and award for the painstaking works of those professionals.

  【尾段】

  In closing, it is my stand is that both extraordinary stars and other professionals have every reason to enjoy well-paid jobs, however, professionals’ efforts deserve high paying salaries

  【经典语料】

  1. it is not rare to see that 这一点很常见

  2. have a comfortable salary 拥有高薪

  3. enjoy extremely high income 拥有高薪

  4. have handsomely paid jobs 拥有高薪的工作

  5. other professionals 其他的专业人士

  6. worldly famous stars 世界著名的明星

  7. famous entertainers and athletes 著名的演员和运动员

  8. top stars = famous actors and sportsmen 明星

  9. assiduous efforts = honest hard work辛勤的努力

  10. relieve pressure triggered by modern life 缓解了现代生活的压力

  11. relatively finite career time 相对短暂的职业生涯

  12. strive for stardom为了明星梦奋斗

  13. Armed Police Soldiers shoulder the obligation of defending the country. 武警官兵保卫祖国。

  14. have sound reasons to get high economic reward 有充分的理由得到高薪

  15. Lawyers usually play the role of safeguarding the dignity of law. 律师扮演了维护法律尊严的责任。

  16. Educators impart knowledge and educate people. 教育者教书育人。

  17. Doctors shoulder the responsibility of healing the wounded and rescuing the dying 医疗工作者承担救死扶伤的责任。

  18. top stars are definitely over-paid 明星明显薪水过高

  19. Striving for stardom requires large amounts of industrious work. 为明星梦奋斗需要大量辛勤的工作。

  20. deserve high paying salaries 应该得到高薪

  21. Other professionals like doctors, researchers, scientists, are making substantial contribution to our community. 其他的专业人士,诸如医生、研究者、科学家,对于我们的社会作出的贡献更大。

  22. Personal wealth is not in proportion to realization of social value 个人财富和社会价值不成正比。

  23. discourage the initiative and zeal of people in other fields 打击了其他行业人士工作的热情。

  24. Both famous stars and other professionals have every reason to enjoy well-paid jobs. 明星和专业人士都有高薪的理由。

  25. The key to the problem depends on one’s personal ability and the devotion to the society. 个人的能力和对于社会的贡献是关键因素。

  【作者介绍】

  新东方网专栏作家:薛鹏(@雅思小鹏哥),长春市作家协会会员,高中时代出版诗文集《选择坚强》, 每年创作20万字托福雅思原创语料库以及范文。吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士。17年英语教学经验 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教学经历),前长春新东方功勋教师,多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思写作8分,托福写作29分)。

  爱生活,爱运动,爱音乐电影,爱旅行美食,爱读书摄影,更爱英语教学。20岁登上英语讲台,主讲英语万词速记课程。熟悉GRE、IELTS、TOEFL、SAT、CET等各级别词汇教学。

  大一时即在报刊杂志上主持“英语学习系列谈”以及“薛鹏教你学单词”等专栏。2006年获得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军,全国总决赛大学成人组二等奖。

  对于各类写作课程有精深研究,授课方式行云流水,妙语连珠,知识底蕴深厚,对学员极具有启迪性和激励性。

  教学理念:Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注满一桶水,而是点燃一把火)

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