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新东方托福写作语料库:单一职业选择前是否应该尝试多元职业

2016-01-18 14:57

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作者:薛鹏

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  【工作类】 单一职业选择前是否应该尝试多元职业

新东方托福写作语料库:单一职业选择前是否应该尝试多元职业

  【工作类】

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should take different kinds of jobs before they take a career in a long term 年轻人在单一职业选择前要从事多元职业,是否认同?

  【写作步骤】

  1. 词汇替换:替换题目中的核心词汇

  2. 作家立场:确立主题观点

  3. 思路拓展:构思支持或者反驳的理由和例证

  4. 正文写作:按照布局,行文展开

  5. 仔细检查:坚持文章的逻辑、词汇、句法。

  【全文布局】

  1. 首段:背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

  2. 二段:第一次支持作家立场以及细节展开

  3. 三段:第二次支持作家立场以及细节展开

  4. 四段:第三次支持作家立场以及细节展开(或者让步不支持观点的合理性+ 再加以反驳)

  5. 尾段:再次亮明观点 + 总结理由

  【头脑风暴】

  王小花貌美如花,李小草勤俭持家,但是,鱼和熊掌不能兼得,得失得失,有得有失,所以,职业选择我们只能依赖自我的兴趣和优势,最终单一选择或者多元职业选择。小鹏哥信奉的职业观是:先就业,后择业,如果可能,自我创业。

  【作家立场】

  有人认为单一职业选择前应该体验多元职业,我完全认同上面的观点,我将通过如下的文章努力证实我的立场。

  【思路拓展】

  1. 我们说一个人的情商很高,是说这个人有广泛的人脉资源,可以借势用力,找到勤奋高效的成功方法。

  2. 今天做的事情越多,未来能做的事情就更多,因为艺多不压身。

  3. 多元职业选择意味着丰富人生体验和持久的新鲜感。

  【范文赏析】

  【首段】背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

  One of the characteristics of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their favorite jobs. However,it often happens that people fall into a dilemma when faced with job selection. An opinion springs up that before pursuing the lifelong career, one is supposed to embark on multiple jobs. I am completely in support of the above statement and will endeavor to exemplify my opinion on this matter throughout the following essay.

  【解析】

  1. One of the characteristics of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their favorite jobs. 现代职业选择的特征之一就是:人们在选择心仪的工作的时候,享有更多的自由。

  2. An opinion springs up that before pursuing the lifelong career, one is supposed to embark on multiple jobs. I am completely in support of the above statement and will endeavor to exemplify my opinion on this matter throughout the following essay. 有人认为单一职业选择前应该体验多元职业,我完全认同上面的观点,我将通过如下的文章努力证实我的立场。

  【二段】第一次支持单一职业前要从事多元职业:

  The most glaring benefit of taking up a rich variety of employments is that one could find out what his or her interest really lies in and tap his or her infinite potentials by means of embarking on manifold jobs. In other words, to secure new jobs indicates one needs to constantly face up to the new career challenges, in this sense, job-transition provides job-seekers with manifold precious chances of self-improvement. Meanwhile, Job hoping means a broad range of work and life experience and constant sense of refreshment.

  【解析】

  1. The most glaring benefit of …… is that …… ……的最明显的利好在于……

  2. Job-transition provides job-seekers with manifold precious chances of self-improvement. 跳槽给求职者提供了多元的自我提升的机会。

  3. Job hoping means a broad range of work and life experience and constant sense of refreshment. 跳槽意味着广阔的人生和工作的阅历,持久的新鲜感。

  【三段】第二次支持单一职业前要从事多元职业:

  Another advantageous aspect stemming from multiple career option is that one could become more competitive and versatile. After all, knowledge is not a burden. More vocational skills could be acquired and the relevant working experience in different fields could be accumulated via taking different kinds of jobs. It is conceivable that a new employee has to learn from other colleagues and resolve unfamiliar crisis in order to adapt to the new working environment. His or her sociability, viability and adaptability will be quickly cultivated when braving new career challenges.

  【解析】

  1. Another advantageous aspect stemming from …… is that …… 另外一个来自……的优势就在于……

  2. knowledge is not a burden 艺多不压身

  3. it is conceivable that ……可以想象的是……

  4. His or her sociability, viability and adaptability will be quickly fostered when braving new career challenges. 当人勇敢面对新事业挑战的时候,其社交能力,生存能力和适应能力可以被培养。

  【三段】第三次支持单一职业前要从事多元职业:

  To make my final point, to take up jobs in diverse fields enables one to enlarge his or her circle of friends so that one could establish well-connected interpersonal network. Better human resources, to some extent, mean more precocious opportunities of job-promotion, comfortable salary and even the possibility of carving out own one career. For example,My Uncle Paul has been embarking on self-employment for more than five years, his achievement in career can be greatly attributed to his well-connected interpersonal relationship, which has been accumulated by undertaking diverse jobs.

  【解析】

  1. the possibility of carving out own one career v 自我创业的可能

  2. His achievement in career can be greatly attributed to his well-connected interpersonal relationship, which has been accumulated by undertaking diverse jobs. 叔叔保罗创业的成功很大程度上可以被归结为良好的人脉资源,而这些资源都是通过多元职业而积累的。

  【尾段】再次亮明作家立场:

  In a nutshell, I once again re-confirm my position that multiple career choice is superior to focusing on a single career,therefore, it is wise to try different jobs before selecting a lifelong career. Although undertaking a lifelong career from the beginning of getting employed might means career stability and financial security, there exists something more significant than those so-called merits in the long run.

  【解析】

  1. in a nutshell, I once again re-confirm my position that …… 总之,我再次重申我方立场……

  2. Multiple career choice is superior to focusing on a single career. 多元职业优越于单一职业选择。

  3. It is wise to try different jobs before selecting a lifelong career. 选择终生事业之前,尝试多元职业是明智的。

  【经典语料】

  1. take different kinds of jobs = embark on multiple jobs v从事多样的工作

  2. take different kinds of jobs = take up a rich variety of employments v从事多样的工作

  3. take a career in a long term = focus on a single career v专注于一份事业

  4. take a career in a long term = to experience job-transition = to experience the job hopping v体验跳槽

  5. in order to find out their interests and tap their infinite potentials v为了找到兴趣所在及开发无限的潜能

  6. acquire more knowledge and accumulate more experience v学习更多的知识和积累更多的经验

  7. acquire more vocational skills and accumulate relevant working experience v学习多样的职业技能和积累相关的工作经验

  8. make more new friends = enlarge one’s circle of friends v 扩大交友圈

  9. sociability, viability and adaptability n社交能力,生存能力,适应能力

  10. establish well-connected interpersonal network v建立起良好的人脉网络

  【作者介绍】

  新东方网专栏作家:薛鹏(@雅思小鹏哥),长春市作家协会会员,高中时代出版诗文集《选择坚强》, 每年创作20万字托福雅思原创语料库以及范文。吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士。17年英语教学经验 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教学经历),前长春新东方功勋教师,多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思写作8分,托福写作29分)。

  爱生活,爱运动,爱音乐电影,爱旅行美食,爱读书摄影,更爱英语教学。20岁登上英语讲台,主讲英语万词速记课程。熟悉GRE、IELTS、TOEFL、SAT、CET等各级别词汇教学。

  大一时即在报刊杂志上主持“英语学习系列谈”以及“薛鹏教你学单词”等专栏。2006年获得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军,全国总决赛大学成人组二等奖。

  对于各类写作课程有精深研究,授课方式行云流水,妙语连珠,知识底蕴深厚,对学员极具有启迪性和激励性。

  教学理念:Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注满一桶水,而是点燃一把火)

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